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The flight back was the worst and the only time Rainbow didn't feel like flying at all. When he finally got back up to where his friend was waiting he looked at the yellow pony with eyes of complete failure and didn't even bother to breath a word until he looked over and saw the winners getting measured for their uniforms. Seeing them over there released all the anger inside as he viciously punched the cloud wall next to him.

'"I CAN'T BELIEVE I MESSED THIS UP" Rainbow howled while his friend stood beside him. "This was it,my one and only shot to make something of myself and I just completely blew it." He punched the hole again which automatically reformed itself due to the pegasi cloud construction magic.

Butterscotch looked down at him feeling more sorry for him then he ever felt to anyone before."I'm sure you did everything you could out there and I'm certain next time they'll take you in without a second thought"

"Next time?! This was a one time deal Butters. You only get one shot at these things and when you miss your chance you're never gonna hit it again" Rainbow said fighting and loosing a battle to hold back his tears. This was the first time Butters ever saw him cry and he did not like it one bit.

"Well you still have a very important job to do back in Ponyville,I-I mean without the the rain we could not grow any crops or we might go really thirsty."He explain tying to calm him down.

"Oh whoope-te-do. It's not like any other pegasus can't do that" He proclaimed feeling even worst now "I need speed Butters I was born with a need for it I...I... I DON'T WANT TO PUSH DAMN CLOUDS FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE" He shouted this time headbutting the wall knocking a hole clean through without it reforming itself. Now Butterscotch was to frighten to even go near him at this point. He could never get next to Rainbow when he got this angry.

"Guess that's the life you're dealt"A voice from across said. They both glanced over and were surprised to see Hellfire standing there with a cigar in his mouth and shades over his eyes ."Not gonna lie colt. That was wicked flying out there the speed and agility you demonstrated was second to none...other then me of course." He flicked his ashes off to the side. "Damn shame you couldn't show proper teamwork though, hehe, that's what being a Wonderbolt is all about."

"Hellfire, you gotta listen" Rainbow started. "I train and practice everyday for this,y-yeah gotta give me another chance you gotta-"

"Sora really wanted you in" Hellfire interrupted. "She kept on and on how you were ready to take the hit for your team, we watched the whole thing you know. You took the most hits out there, but you kept on pushing,never backing down until that head-shot nailed you" Hellfire released another chuckle. "How we needed that sorta loyalty. For ever hit you took you team didn't have too. Those are her words not mine."he said taking another inhale. 

"But...why then?" Rainbow said not being able to hold his tears back.

"Well funny you should say that " He began taking to cigar out of his mouth and his shades off merely inches away from Rainbows' face. Riddle me this... What would you do if some punk-ass tried flirting with your girlfriend and all it took was one simple "no" to make sure they won't be a problem again" With that he blow smoke in Rainbows' face and trotted back whistle his a familiar tune.

Rainbow's eyes began to to twitch and his heart sinking to the bottom of his stomach. He was flooded with mixed feelings of sadness, regret, and anger,but had no idea what to do with them.

                                            Two Months Later

"Oh no! This isn't good Barb," Dusk shine started going though all his notes to see if he had a plan for this problem.

"Oh come one Dusk, whatever happen I'm sure you're just getting too worked up over nothing...again." Barb sighed as she preceded down the hollow tree staircase. Dusk Shine would probably keep her up all night again if this situation wasn't resolved so she came down to hear him out.

Although she really wasn't looking forward to it.

 "Lord Solaris canceled his meeting with me at the castle. he said that he had an urgent meeting to attend to and he would get with me next week." Dusk explain a bit more worried the usual. he put his notes down and began thinking of ways this "problem?" could be resolved.

"And? Just go next week no problem"

"Yes it is a problem, because he's rescheduling me, for Empress Blackfeather."

"Black who-now??"She said with a confusing yet interesting look on her face.

"Empress Blackfeather Barb" Dusk started to explain "The high empress of the east,she leads the griffons that protect the borders of Equestria form every other species that would harm us.They have a mutual agreement in place where Lord Solaris and Prince Artemis would raise the sun and moon while they keep our lands protected. That's why most of our problems come within our borders cause ever problem outside is taken care of by her army."

"If she's such a big deal how come I've never heard of her before?"

"Not many ponies have. Equestria has been able to become self-sufficient so there's no need for contact with the outside world. I don't believe she's been in our lands for over a thousand years. So whatever this meeting is, it's extremely important."

"Wait...a Thousand!? Does she have the life-span of Alicorn?"

"I believe she has lived a lot longer then that Barb. It is said that she formed the empire during the Great darkness. That she was able to defeat the eternal night. There isn't really more written here about her, maybe just a few mentions here and there but everything is vague."

"But Nightterror Nebula was the one that brought the great darkness...right?" She was honestly confused.

"Like I said, every thing here is vague.Maybe if I ask the Lord during our meeting...or...YEAH even better, Barb, take a letter"

Barb instantly grab a scroll and pen and began writing down word for word that Dusk shine spoke.

"Dear Lord Solaris, I have no problem rescheduling my appointment with you; however due to the circumstances of your rescheduling, I request, if possible, that Barb and I accompany you on your trip to see Empress Blackfeather and to learn more about the world around us. Your faithful student, Dusk Shine."

After she signed Dusks' name she lit up the scroll with her fire and sent it on it's way to the Lord.

"You think he'll let us go?"

"I'm pretty sure it won't be a problem, if anything-""

"Dusk!" A voice outside shrieked. They didn't even have time to say "what?" before the source of the voice barged through the door. It was their friend Elusive who's mane was all jammed up and was inhaling and exhaling air rapidly. "I *pant* I *pant*I need your help now! They're destroying my store!...*pant* Oh dear lord I'm never running that far again*pant*." 

Dusk didn't give it a second though and grab barbed followed their friend to the source of the chaos. While their friend was groaning as he began to run back to his store as well. Wondering why doesn't he just teleport?

"GRAH!" Applejack gruffed as he was slammed into a mannequin, busting it up into pieces. "I'm gonna lay you out!" Apple jack picked him self up and began to lunged and his Blue oppressor. "You no good cloud-slothing boar."

"Oh you what some? Come and get it." Rainbow Blitz said who returned a charge except from the air. Both of them butting heads and sending each other at opposite ends of the store. Smashing even more delicate items.

They both picked themselves up and began trading blows while Dusk and Barb just sat outside the store."That's it?" Dusk asked as he gestured at Elusive."Rainbow and Applejack always fight and every time they always clean up after themselves and move on. Best to just let them get it out of their system" Dusk explain feeling a little more relax for Rainbow and Apple always tend to get in these skirmishes. And every time Dusk or one of their friends intervene in their scrabbles someone always getting hurt...more-so the one in the middle.

"B-But they never fight in my store" The marshmallow pony cried. "and I have really fragile items that I was using for a suit and-"


"Oh now, look at what ye did now Rainbow!" Applejack scream from inside.

"ME! You're the one that threw me into it you dumb hick"Rainbow replied even angrier the before.

"OH NOW THAT'S AN ASS-WHOOPING" More crashes and breaks came from inside the house as it kept on shaking.

"uhhh Dusk maybe we should stop this one fight, I mean, I know what happen to you last time but most of the time there's no name-calling. This must be pretty serious" Barb asked.

"Yeah I think you're right" Dusk replied "Me and Barb will go in first, Elusive you stay here and-" Elusive was passed out on the ground "-do absolutely nothing, I'll handle this. Lets go Barb" Duck teleported inside the house which looked as if a Tornado went by. He used his magic to separate the two brutes before they began another clash.

"Alright that's enough you two" He scream. Barb jumped off his side and stood beside him looking worried and also using Dusk a pony-shield .Dusk held both of them in place with his magic determined to get some answers.

"BACK off Dusk, Applejunk has this coming to him"Rainbow yelled almost breaking the telekinetic spell holding him in place.

"Coming to me now? You brought this on yerself" Applejack howled back fighting to free himself as well.

"I'm not going to stay out of this when my two best friends are fighting and destroying my other friends store. Now talk or so help me Solaris I will leave you two here." Dusk demanded.

"All ah did was to come here and drop off an apple order and my so called "friend" here sucked hooved me"

"Yeah and Mr. Clint Woodeast over their costed me my job" Rainbow barked.

"Ok first: Rainbow, ease up on the name-calling now! and second what do you mean he "costed " you your job?" Dusk asked but Apple jack answered him

Applejack sighed. "ah made some rather..."unpleansted" complaints to the mayor that we weren't getting enough rain and that it wasn't following the schedules. Next thing ah hear is that, Rainbow is fired, somepony else delivered the rain to mah farm and ah get caught in a fight inside a suit making store." Applejack bowed his head "Blitz, ah didn't know that it would get you fired. The apples weren't getting enough rain ah just... if ah'd known ah would've talked to you first. Ah swear"

Dusk let both of the down so they could talk without restraints."Rainbow care to explain what happen? Why did you get removed from the team?"

"Yeah...  I've been off lately, and well I haven't been as focus. I let a lot of clouds go unchecked. When the mayor brought this up to the head weather management up in Cloudsdale...well I guess that was the it and that kicked me out."

" you know what you're going to do now though?" Dusk asked

"I got a new job actually and came by here to pick up the uniform then Applejack walked in and I kind of lost it. AJ, didn't mean to start a fight over that"

"No harm done..." he then looked around the shop "To me at least, lets help out ol' Elusive here and clean up this place." Dusk handed them all a broom and began to sweep up everything."Where is he anyway?"

"He's uhhhhh taking a nap?" Dusk explain extremely sheepishly.

"He fainted didn't he?"

"eeeeyup" Dusk said was a deep voice. 

"Lets just get this place cleaned up, besides, I want to kick your ass in something other then a clothing shop" Rainbow said with a chuckle.

"Ah feel the same, other it'll be me that'll do the ass-kicking" Applejack replied with a smirk.

"Bull crap, if Dusk hadn't had shown up when he did I would've made Applebuck an only child" 

Applejack quirked an eyebrow "Oh so you think you could take on my big sister then?" Rainbow eyes shot inside as he could easily take on Applejack, however Red Gala was a whole other story. 

"Point taken."Rainbow and the rest of them continue to sweep when Barb began to burp a parchment which everyone in the room took notice.

"Great news Dusk" She began "The Lord said yes to us going with him and you have access to the entire Library of Empress Blackfeather."He also gave us tickets for the train, we leave tomorrow."

"Wonderful news Barb, lets clean up here and begin packing" Dusk beamed.

"Oh wait second..." Barb continued "He wants me to stay here for some reason" Barb had a little disappointed and went unheard while the stallions began talking.

"uh Dusk who the hay is this Empress?" Applejack asked

"I'll explain later but first before I forget. Rainbow what was this new job of yours?"

Blitz sighed loudly "Mail delivery."
A Dawn Renewed Chapter 3
Boys will be boys

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    Hellfire once more took his stand on the podium to address every pony there. "Congratulations to all those that have made it this far in the competition, and for those of you who failed, do not tally on the fact that you weren't good enough. Instead take this to heart and push yourselves even more so that one day, you may join our ranks." He drew his attention to the collection of the finalist. "All of you have proven you have what it takes to become a Wonderbolt. You've proved that your strength knows no bounds,your speed could give the mightiest blizzard chills, your reflexes sharper then any blade, and your agility in tuned enough to out-fly any dragon."

Rainbow Blitz stood in-line with the rest of the Pegasi looking up with a smirk on his face. 'Stallion loves to him himself talk' he thought as Hellfire continued.

"However, one challenge remains and only fifteen spots are open in our regiment. To distinguish between who belongs, you will be competing in a cooperative challenge where only the top three teams will be chosen. These teams will be selective at random because we need to know how well you coop with working with unfamiliar faces. We need to know that in the time of battle you can fly with those next to you and call them your comrade, And since you were all lined up, I will begin selecting the teams."




Rainbow Blitz's mind was racing. It'd been years sense he flowed with a team. Last time he did that, it was in Hoofball all the way back in flight school.




As they got close, his stomach started to clutch 'Comeoncomeoncomeon , please let me be paired up with a good team ' He thought





'Four!' He shouted in his mind as he flew over doing a couple of tricks to where the other fours were while the other ponys stared at him at him as if he should be embarrassed. 

When he saw all the fours grouped together but as he approached they made room for him.Rainbow had not the slightest clue as to who they were as he scanned each one of them, the other ponies giving him the same hospitality until one mare placed her hoof in the center.One by one the others ,including Rainbow, did the same.

"I don't know who you all of you are"  The grey mare said with a strong tone in her voice "But what I do know is this, we're gonna win this competition and earn our rightful spots among the Wonderbolts, So let's do this. Team four on three; ONE! TWO! THREE!"

"TEAM FOUR" The five Screamed.

Rainbow did not know who or where this filly was from but he instantly liked her. With her and the rest of them on his team there's no way he can lose.

"Alright listen up, because I'm only gonna say this once" Hellfire announced  "The last event is a simple: First you're all going to race down to Ponyville and pick up a practice dummy from Sora while dodging "enemy fire" from the residents of Ponyville. Then, you are to "escort it" to Sweet Apple Acres and by "escort it" I mean you're going to haul that piece of shit over a live battlefield will a small piece of wood to block off enemy fire with me there letting you know how well you did. Everypony got that?" He said in an almost joking matter as if he's expecting a show. After he gave the instructions he began to fly off to the starting line.

Blitz looked over his team and noticed that he was with three other stallions and one mare. "Okay..." He began "Who wants to carry the dummy?" They all looked at each other expecting the others to say something first but none of them gave a response. Rainbow was about to speak up, however he was stopped as the one mare volunteered.

"I could do it" She said in the most innocent tone ever.The other stallions looked at each other with disbelief and then looked at the cloud they were standing on trying to figure out the best way to tell her.

"Well..." The yellow colt started " I dunno, you sure you can even-"

"Stop!" The grey mare interrupted with her hoof in the air "I know what you're about to say and just don't. I'll carry the dummy and you guys cover me alright?" She said with a more demanding tone now.

"But..." The colt tried to interject but was stopped by Rainbow blitz who said "Don't...just let the mare do what she wants, beside we all can cover her better anyways"

"Alright if there are no more questions we should get to the starting line" The other blue stallion suggested.They all took off to the edge of Cloudsdale

When they arrived at the edge of Cloudsdale they saw the other racers lining up as instructed and joined them together as a team to await for the signal. They all saw Hellfire standing above him with his hoof held high ready to to start the race. Everypony there had the highhoofs down and backhooves up just itching to sprint after the ground.

'This is it' Rainbow though 'One more race and I'll be in.No more pushing clouds or waiting around. I'll be making something of myself'

"Before we began, I forgot to mention one tiny detail" Hellfire blurted out shocking the racers. "Being a Wonderbolt also means planning for anything, and I mean,anything. So in addition to having the townsfolk laying down enemy fire they'll also be providing a special weapon at my personal request" He said with a smile escaping his face. "All you need to know is you better be protecting your carrier at all cost." and without giving others time to get back ready he imminently slammed his hoof down signaling the race with the horn going off.

Rainbow, however, was ready for this and raced down positioning in first straight off while also leaving his team behind for they were caught off guard as well. It wasn't long before others were hot on his trail but he wouldn't give them an inch until he heard one of his teams mates pleading for him to slow down."Please" she said "You got to slow down the other can't keep up" 

"Slow down?!" Rainbow snorted "What kind of race requires you to slow down?" He sarcastically asked.

"It's called a 'team race' "She responding still struggling to keep up with him.

"Fine then, you go help the others I'm going to buy us some more time" Rainbow said as he sped off completely out of earshot of his teammate before she said one last thing.

While talking to his teammate he let his lead get taken over by three other group and that would not stand for him. He knew there was only one way to win and obliterate the competition while giving his team the edge.

He started flapping his wing harder and faster as the wind flew straight between his eyes water them as he flew faster and faster with a white cone building around him building up tremendous force with each flap of his wing. He was not stopping until he hit the ground.

And with one final flap he heard a boom echo in the distance as he flew straight down with extreme speed. He heard his friend always tell him that his Sonic Rainboom was so intense that it felt like he split open the sky himself and judging how the other racers were in chaos and he was seconds from the ground, felt that was a pretty accurate.


    When he finally touched down at the farm he saw booths set up for the other racers. He instantly galloped over the booth four a waited for his team to show up as he was way ahead of the other racers ."..." he just sat that with the dummy right beside him becoming bored rather quickly waiting for his teammates to finally show up but was greeted with a friendly shout of praise

"That was totally wicked" Sora yelled standing on her hind legs. She was stationed behind the dummy booth to give instructions to those. "That was even more awesome then one at Gleamings Shields weddings. How you even do that?"

"Oh that? I do Sonic Rainbooms in my sleep" He said while stretching his wings and legs. "Maybe if I get in the Wonderbolts I can show you a thing or two about about it and maybe some other tricks as well. It'll be just between you and me." He said while giving her wink. He may not be as formal as his friend Elusive but he had no trouble getting all kinds of mare to fall over him. Him and his friend Guilder used to always be the top flirts in flight school and continue to always wow the fillies every chance he got.

"oh uh..." She muttered trying desperately to hide her blush with no success" we'll see how the competition goes, though I'd love to have to stallion of your structure on the team."

Rainbow gave a successful grin 'nailed it' he thought while wiping his hoof on his chest.

"While we're on the subject of 'team' where's yours?"

Rainbow snapped back to the real world " uhhh well I went ahead to try and buy them some time you know." Rainbow stuttered "They couldn't keep up so I just... broke open the sky and bought them some time to catch up...cause I'm a team player...and stuff"

Sora just kept a straight face " abandon your allies to help them catch up by causing a mass explosion to buy them some time by slowing down the other racers behind you so your team could speed up because they were with the other slow racers that was also behind you to" She said with a disappoint look across her face "By helping them of course."

Rainbow had a picture perfect look of "you don goofed" across his face. "uhhh it's not a very well thought out plan" He said while kicking the dirt a little as the other racers caught up. He was happy to see his other team thought they didn't look to happy to see him

"WHAT THE HECK IS YOUR PROBLEM?!" the yellowed colt screamed and got right in his face

"You left us behind there!" the blue colt added "The whole point on being on a team is to work together or haven't you been on a team before?"

"Kick each other asses later" The one mare butted in "We're not going to win by yelling at each other" She ran over and grabbed the dummy which was not as heavy as she thought. "Everyone grab a shield and lets move"

"Look I did what I thought I had to ok?  Rainbow said ignoring the mare's words "bunch of ungrateful mules" He looked over his shoulders "no offence."

"None taken" The town mule said

"But I did that so the other teams would get thrown off and buy you guys some time. You should be thanking me for Solaris sake"

"Really? Okay" The Blue colt started with a smirk. "Thank you for ditching us and blowing us all the way to the Crystal Empire WITH YOU FREAKEN SONIC RAINBOOM. How was that?" he put on the most sarcastic grin

Rainbow was seconds from knocking all his teeth out when the Grey mare shouted "I said enough! if you really want to fight wait till after the race but if we really want to win we need to stop fighting and move" She hauled the dummy over her shoulders which she now felt the weight. "Now this dummy is too heavy to fly with so give me cover and watch out for the 'surprise'"

"If it's too heavy maybe I should-" The Yellowed stallion started.

"Don't even think about it. Just give me some cover and lets move, and keep a lookout for that 'surprise' I highly doubt that little stunt at the beginning of the race was the only thing Hellfire had in-store"

The four stallions nodded and grabbed a saddle with a shield attached and began moving to the finish line while giving the mare cover. The townsfolk began to bombard them with water balloons filled with paint from all directions without relent. The balloons splatted against the hard shields completely shading it with all sorts of colors and feeling the route of plastic and rubber shrapnel. The mare holding the dummy kept moving forward while her stallion defenders protected her from all harm.'This'll be one hell of a story to tell' she thought not slowing down.

She kept a steady pace which is more that can be said about the other contestants as everywhere Rainbow looked he saw the other teams struggling to keep pressing forward. Their good luck streak had to end sometime as the blue stallion was nailed in the chest and fell hard to the ground. Rainbow looked at his fallen teammate and saw the townsfolk getting ready to aim. 'I'm going to remember every single one of their faces and as Solaris as my witness they get so soaked that they won't have to shower for a week' Rainbow threaten with his inner thoughts as he blocked the next wave allowing his friend to stand up.

"Thanks man" The blue colt stated in appreciation. He trotted over to where he original was to protect the mare.Rainbow followed shortly after he held off another wave of enemy fire

"Dangit has anypony mange to hit them" A yellow townspony asked.

"I hit a couple but they don't seem to be slowing down" Another replied as he threw another balloon.

The yellow pony began stroking his chin. "Alright I think it's time. BRING OUT...'THE IRON CURTAIN'. There was a lot of cheering as all the townsfolk ceased their fire.

Rainbow and the rest of the ponies out in the field began scratching their heads as to wonder why they stop firing."The ponies they stopped firing" The yellow mare in Rainbows' group asked.

"Maybe they ran outof ammo?" The light Blue stallion wondered

However Rainbow was just struck with fear. "Haven't you ever read an action story?" He snorted. "Every time the enemy stops firing bad things always happen."

"You've read way to many comic book" The Blue colt stated

But Rainbow theory was proven correct as shortly after the townsfolk stopped their assault they saw what could only be pure utter horror. As approach from their left they saw 8 barrels of pure pink arrived on a cart hauled in by four stallions one of them being a familiar farm pony that Rainbow Blitz didn't see. Good thing too, as the one pony sitting on top of the barrels was a pink pony sporting a blood red bandanna holding his big poofey mane back.

"ARE YOU FREAKEN KIDDING ME?!" Rainbow Blitz shouted as every single competitors stopped to see what monstrosity was towering over them. 

"Uhhh do you know him or what that thing is" The grey mare whisply asked.

Shortly after the cannons were set up two huge jugs of water balloons were set up beside it as two pegasi began hooking it up.

"Yeah that would have to be my crazy friend Bubble Berry and it looks like he made a few changes to his party cannons" Rainbow blitz explained "And don't think he's here to help us."

"If he's your friend do you think he'll take it easy on us?" The Yellow stallion asked hoping for a good answer.

"uhhh..." Rainbow blitz started sweating bullets "Long story short we have an agreement and he won't be taking it easy on me" Rainbow cursed his luck.'Yep this is payback isn't it'

They all heard a whirling sound as the small cannons began to rotate with increasing speed.

"INCOMING" Rainbow yelled to his comrades. As they all held their shields up high and down low at times. The cannons opened up to a barrage of balloon that shot so fast it was scientifically possibly for the rubber to keep intact as the balloon soared through the air nailing everypony it was in front of.

Rainbows' group was taking a lot of fire as they braced themselves while still moving rather slowly towards the end. "Could this get any worst?" the yellow pony stupidly asked as the townsfolk resumed their onslaught.

"Never say that again" Rainbow dashed threaten with a glare. The finish line was coming into view. They were so close but it felt like miles ahead as Rainbow took a nasty hit to the face completely bluring his vision for a while until he hit the ground.

Bubble Berry sat on his cannon spraying down fire singing a a little song that on one seem to recognize ""Ya-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta ya-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta-ta do-de-da-va-daa-da-dada!" He sang. "

"You sure you don't know any of those ponies?" One of the town ponies asked the war torn stallion.

"I KNOW ONE OF THEM BUT DON'T WORRY WE HAVE A SEEEEEEEEEEECRET AGREEMENT AND HE CAN'T GET MAD A ME"The pink pony proclaimed. "PLUS THIS  PARTY MINI-GUN IS TOO MUCH FUN TO STOP" He continued to mow down the progress ponies .He just kept up the bombardment until he hit his 'friend' straight in the face."ohhhh, I DON'T THINK HE'LL FORGIVE THAT BUT ,AFTER ALL THIS IS JUST A SIMPLE RACE!"He kept firing at the groups not knowing that the mare was asking him what a 'mini-gun' was.

Rainbow vision was weaving back and forth as he saw the one mare on his team reach her hoof out to help him up."COME ON WE HAVE TO MOVE NOW."Rainbow strain to keep himself up as another balloon hit him in the leg. The burning in his face and his leg was tremulously painful however he picked himself and ran over to were she left the dummy. "I GOT THE DUMMY THE FINISH LINE IS RIGHT THERE LETS MOVE! NOW!" She picked up the dummy once more and all five of them kept holding off the balloon slaughter until they finally crossed the finish line.

"Nice work" Hellfire commended as Rainbows team made it to the finish. Rainbow still had a loud ringing in the back of his head but it didn't matter he made it through one of the scariest moments of his life and was sure that he would be a Wonderbolt no doubt. He looked around the general area as the other soaked ponies began to remove their equipment.Some of them still shaking as though they had just been through hell.As the last pnies made it through the finish line Hellfire stepped up to address the contestants."Before we begin the judging I want all of you to speak freely in telling me what you thought of my "surprise?""

None of the Pegasi there could give a straight answer.Most of them saying something under their breath but none of them with the guts to tell the truth."I'm wondering how the hell you got Bubble Berry to assist you" a certain Blue Pegasus replied

"Oh that?" Hellfire responded with a chuckle."That was easy. All I had to say that I needed the crazy pony in town with the most insane way to throw water balloons and everypony that was in my earshot pointed directly to another pony called "Bubble Berry." It is a Wonderbolts job to be prepare for anything though some of you were however most of you fell flat on keeping your senses in check and I will be grading harshly on that" He snorted as he return to his other Wonderbolt companions to begin judging.

About 30 mins later Hellfire trotted up with Sora on his left and Fleetway on his right ,Sora looking disappointed for some reason."I want to thank you all for competing but we don't have enough spots for all of you so here as the four teams that made it:Teams 1,3,5,6 you have qualified present yourself to be awarded a uniform as for teams 2 and 4 you gave a good try but better luck next time.

Rainbow felt his heart sink into the lowest pit of his stomach as he dreams were shatter right before his eyes. He looked over to his other teammates that were giving him a deadly glare but the mare held them back insisting on it wasn't worth it."Hey" The Mare that never told Rainbow her named asked "You wanna grab a bite real fast?"

"I'm good ,thanks."Rainbow had sorrow in his voice "Besides I got somone waiting on me" He said as he flew off

A Dawn Renewed Chapter 2
And chapter number 2...dear God I got a long way to cath up.

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Lets see it's been...dear God 3 fucking years since I last made a journal entry. I mean I've always got on DA but never bother to update my status. Shows how responsible I am ^^;.

Anyway I scrapped my previous story because I made it because it was my first and...well, I hated it. HOWEVER, I've started a new one and it's still a sonic/MLP cross-over but done a little...differently so if you like my work check that out...though it ain't technically my'll know when you read it. Have Fun.
Deep within the heart of Equestria, rest on the horizon of the Unicorn Mountains and the Foal Range laid the kingdom of Canterlot. A land ruled by the wise and most fairness of Lords the Mighty Lord Solaris and his younger brother, Prince Artemis which had peace and progress throughout the lands. Constructed directly into a mountain side, the great city was firmly planted with its majestic structures lording over the land for the entire world to see. Greatest of all stood the white castle where the brothers resided and spent most of their days looking over their subjects.

It was an evening like no other just as the young prince had brought forth the night, a messenger bearing the symbols of a courier from the faraway lands demanded an audience with the lord. From at first glance she was denied entry until she was recognized as none-other then a griffon harbinger the ropes of a royal courier. After she had proved to the lords guards that it was at up most importance that the message be delivered, the ailcorn lord was awakened.

"I trust that I was not awoken for just anything" He stated with an authority tone. The ailcorn lord sat on his throne with his blazing orange mane flowing behind him and his mighty beard hiding any facial expressions as he look down on the griffon.

"Your lordship this message comes from none other then Empress Blackfeather who gave specific instructions that this warning is for your eyes and your eyes only" She respond with a voice of a ghost.

Solaris almost flinched when she dropped the name 'Blackfeather' as he had not heard that name in a long time."Very well" He said as he began to read the scroll.

As he began to read his posture began to digress and a worried look struck across his his."This...this is most troubling. Why would empress Blackfeather call the aid of Equestria. Long has she kept her armies in protection from those that wish us dead or enslaved. It's just by her authority alone that none dared even attempt in attacking , and if I'm not mistaking her rule has gone even beyond my brother and I" He questioned

"You're right to assume this" The griffin began "But take head, the enemy that threatens our lands is worst then any this world has ever seen and if we do not join together then all races may be endangered"

The lord looked up into the bright moon. "Courier, tell empress BlackFeather that I will ponder this new threat however I will not send my ponies to be slaughter."

The courier bowed and was gone in a instant.


"Come on Butters, This is a once and a life time chance and I'm not going to miss it because you want to stop and smell the roses" Rainbow Blitz yelled back to his friend.

The two Pegasi were making their way past through all the clouds and into the the great city in the sky ,Cloudsdale. With each beat of their feathers they got high into the city with Rainbow Blitz constantly waiting so his can catch up.Even though Butterscotch was not as strong as a flier as Blitz, he still manged to keep least he tried to keep up.

"Oh boy I'm really sorry for keeping you" He said with his tone dropping. "I really don't want to be a burden, Oh, no there certainly are a lot of ponies coming." Butterscotch pointed out as a lot of Pegasi rushed past him

"Well no duh, This is the first time the Wonderbolts have ever had open tryouts and I will not be missing this. I'm going to completely wreck the competition and finally earn my right to be apart of the greatest fliers ever". He replied with a hint of pride.

As they finally arrive at the proving grounds to resistor Rainbow Blitz for the competition they took in the scene unfolding before them. Wonderbolt stands were set up to sell merchandise, there w were pagasi everywhere training by doing loop-the-loops, corkscrews and other aerodynamics.The more they train the more cocky he got.

"Hehe this'll be a snap. I'm faster then anypony here, I mean look at these guys" He explained as he pointed out the many flaws in his fellow pegsia "See that Brown one? Sloppy, the mare with the bow? she couldn't even complete a full loop." Rainbow looked back at Butterscotch "I got this in the bag, DOUBLE BROHOOF!" He said as he lifted both his forelegs in the air,but Butterscotch just tap him with a very shyly hoof bump ."Dude, He got to work on that"

"Sorry" Butters replied with his head lowered.

"Just get close to the action as you can, I really need my best friend cheering me on during the competition" Rainbow admitted with his hoof on Butters shoulder.

"Of course" Butterscotch replied as he headed up to the stands that were now packed with all kinds of Pegasi.

After Butterscotch had located the perfect seat the announcements shortly began."Ladies and gentlecolts!" the voice boomed loud enough to fill up the entire air space, "We would like to welcome you to watch our best and bravest put their mettle and wings to the test, in hopes of earning a spot on your very own Wonderbolts!… And here they come now! The lighting on a clear day, the one, the only, the WONDERBOLTS!" Just as the announcer finished, the sky was filled with applause and hoof stomping as every head turned upwards to watch the Equestria's best descend from up high. With a mighty roar, the Wonderbolts soared into view, thick black trails of smoke issuing from behind them as they flew in tight, controlled formation. "Oooh's" and "aaah's" were heard from everypony as fancy air techniques were performed in complete unison before erupting in a deafening cheer when they finally landed and took their place at the speaker's podium.

Once the crowd calmed down the Captain of the Wonderbolts, the Pony known as Hellfire, step up on the podium. His burning bright mane could ignite the air around him if not for his sideburns and goatee adding to the impression that you do not want to get on his bad side."I would like to thank you all that has came out today to compete in the trails to becoming one of the greatest flies ever assembled in the history of Equestria. When you compete in the trails ahead you will be examine and judged based on your entire performance. Your speed, your agility, your reflexes, and most importantly, how well you can operate with fellow fliers to get the job done will be strait to the point of exhaustion. To be a Wonderbolt is not a title alone, when you become a Wonderbolt you become the best, and being the best means you got to be fearless, Strong, and willing to do whatever it takes to ensure success. If any one is not willing to complete this requirements, leave now."However not a single Pegasus moved. "Alrighty then, LETS GET THE TRAILS UNDERWAY!" There was a loud cheering emitting from the crowd, and with that he exited the stage and began to head over to his fellow Wonderbolts.

First up was a race. A simple ten laps around the track to determine who was the fastest, but Rainbow Blitz was the last group to get on the track as the whole field could not hold everypony there. "Come on already" He muttered to himself "Hurry up so I can waste all of you." As the last group before him to cross the finish line, he stepped up to the starting line and began to flex his wings as he took in his competition "heh, This'll be easy" He said to himself.As the checker flag flew to start the race he "blitzed" off the starting line quickly passing the other ponies beside him. Racing was in his blood ,it's what he lived for and being the fastest means he could outrace anyone.He was down to already three laps as most other others were just finishing their 2nd.He causally lapped past the other races he came across. The crowd roaring his name as he had finished another lap...then another...and another, there was no stopping this flier as he narrowed his eyes on the path ahead. Going though the final lap he heard his own heartbeat pounding to the beat of his wings as he sprinted to the finish line completely blowing the other races out of the park.

Hellfire walked up to him on the finish line holding a stopwatch in his hoof "*Whistle* pretty slick flying out there kid, you easily beat Fleetways' record with speed like that."

"Oh that?" Rainbow said while trying to straighten his posture up and also hiding the fact that he needed a breather "I do laps like that in my sleep, I'll be flying circles around everypony here."

Hellfire smirked with a hint of praise in his eye. "Well, keep that up and you'll find yourself wearing a Wonderbolt uni-"

"WHOA! I've never seen flying like that, I mean ,like, we could really use a Stallion like you on the team" Another voice barged in cutting Hellfire short. The interruption came by way of a white mare with a Navy blue mane.

It was Sora, Rainbow Bitz knew of her as a Legendary flier and had met her a couple time during the gala and the Royal wending when he ever got a dance with her.However this was the first time she had seen him in action.He blushed at her comment "Oh...uh...It was nothing just...uh...another day in the air. You should see me in my prime, would've left every single one of them in the dust" He said with his chested pumped. He had always been interested in her the way a colt saw the the new girl in school and this was their first meet-up, by ever selling yourself with no limits. All the training he does on a daily biases usually grabs the attention of a lot of wondering mares who would gawk at him with and he would simply put on the tough guy act just to show off even more then he already did, but she was different. Ever sense they danced at the gala he had always been interested in her.

"Sora," Hellfire blurted out with a sound of aggravation. "Aren't you suppose to judge the agility test with Fleetway?"

"OH horse apples, Back to work, seeya around Blitz" She said as she flew off leaving both of them staring at her general direction. 

"You'll have to forgive her" Hellfire stated still looking outwards "I try to keep her inline but every Stud that shows off she just has talk about how great they are."

"Oh ,phsss, I didn't even noticed" Rainbow lied quickly to avoid any problems but still kept his smirk.

"Hm that so eh? Well good luck today Kid" Hellfire said as he spread his wings and took off in the same direction as Sora

The rest of the competition didn't go as bad as it could have. Although Rainbow failed to get first in the reflex test, he did, however, manage to get 2nd coming short to someone named Nebula Shine. Because he didn't move as fast as her, she was able to to dodge and avoid most of the obstacles in her path, though the majority of the problem came from Rainbow just wanting to be the first one to cross the line and this wasn't a test of speed.

When the agility test came up he failed flat when he missed two rings in order to finish first out of all the others. If he hadn't been so focus on being fast he might've gotten first but he was stuck with fourth. Cursing every brain cell in his head to get his act together.

After hours of the Wonderbot trails the final event had arrived.With his victory across the competition he scored more then enough points to qualify.A great majority of competitors were handed consolation prizes and told to join the stands and that ,will a little more training and dedication, they might be able to get in next time. They had narrowed it down to the top 25. Now, it was down to Rainbow Blitz and 24 other ponies. No problem...
A Dawn Renewed Chapter 1
Alrighty so if you read this you're probly wondering "Dafuq did I just read?" Well I'll tell you.

This right here is a spinnoff of one of the greatest cross-overs ever made by noneother then the talented :icongunflame345:. See Gunflame made a cross-over story called "A New Dawn" and I LOVED it. Loved it so much I thought"Holy crap when if this took place in the 63rd universe." When I messaged him with this, he took an interest in my idea so he gave me the go ahead and wanted to see what would happen. So one thing led to another and he it is.

The original: A New Dawn Chapter 1



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Lets see it's been...dear God 3 fucking years since I last made a journal entry. I mean I've always got on DA but never bother to update my status. Shows how responsible I am ^^;.

Anyway I scrapped my previous story because I made it because it was my first and...well, I hated it. HOWEVER, I've started a new one and it's still a sonic/MLP cross-over but done a little...differently so if you like my work check that out...though it ain't technically my'll know when you read it. Have Fun.

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Raynaldo Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconparty1plz: HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAY!! :iconparty1plz:
xgamerx01 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks man :D
Raynaldo Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
How have you been doing?
xgamerx01 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Collage that's what. And is the reason for the extremely late reply.
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Raynaldo Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconparty1plz: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! :iconparty1plz: How are you doing, my friend?
xgamerx01 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
haha Glad someone remembered. I'm doing well thank you for dropping by.
Raynaldo Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Very glad to hear that! Welcome! :iconponyhugplz:
Btw, have a sneak preview of my latest work, maybe you'll like it :D
xgamerx01 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's feacken…
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Raynaldo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Hey, X! Long time no hear!
xgamerx01 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed Who's it going?
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