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The next day

Tails, Sonic and the Pegasus creature were still asleep.

It was 10:00am and everyone was still asleep

"KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK"

Someone was bagging on tails' door

Sonic started to open his eyes

"uhhh…what?' sonic said rubbing his eyes

"KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK"

"Hold on" sonic replied to the people outside the door

He sat up starting to stretch as he walked to the door

"dangit tails…you need a better couch" he thought rubbing his back

"Yes?" sonic said with his eyes barley opened

As soon he opened the door he was attacked with a huge bear hug

"SONIC!!!!!!!!!!!!" said a pink hedgehog

It was Amy and Cream who arrived at tails' house

Amy was a pink hedgehog with a red skirt, red boots and a red hair-band and had a huge hammer. She was always interested in sonic after he saved her from metal sonic years ago and she is always saying that she will be Sonics' girlfriend one day. Cream was an orange, vanilla rabbit with an orange skirt. She was very young being only 6-years old. She is often accompanied by her chao , cheese, but he was not with her this time.

"Ah crap" sonic thought

"oof…hey..Amy" sonic struggled as Amy's' hug was suffocating him

"OH SONIC WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE I'M SO GLAD TO SEE YOU" Amy said, overjoyed  not noticing how hard she was crushing him

Sonic struggled to get some air

"Uhh..Amy I think your crushing him" said cream in a shy voice

"Oh" Amy replied releasing the squished hedgehog "I'm sorry sonic "

"Its ok" replied sonic catching his breath "what are you two doing here?"

"My favorite toy broke and I was hoping tails could fix it" cream said presenting her broken toy

"Oh well tails is asleep right now, me and him have been up late discussing something" sonic said to cream

"Oh well I guess we ca-"cream replied before being interrupted by Amy

"Well we can stay until he wakes up "Amy said "I don't mind being here. Especially if you're here sonic "

This gave sonic a nervous feeling "well I would love to stay but I got to run "said said as he was rushing to the door but Amy blocked his path

"Now hold up sonic, you're going to rush out but I don't think you've eaten breakfast yet? Have you?" Amy stated trying to come up with an accuse to make sonic stay

Sonic stomach started to rumble "crap…"sonic said holding his stomach

"AHA, thought you could skip the most important meal of the day. Well, not on my watch. Go over and sit down while I make you some breakfast" Amy demanded

"Really Amy …oh well no use of arguing"thought sonic

Throughout the past sonic could never get past Amy whenever she set her mind to something, so he grabbed a seat

"Wonder how that horse is holding up questioned sonic still not getting used to the term pegasus

Amy was turning on the stove getting ready to make breakfast for all of them. Cream sat her toy on the counter and started watching TV

"I've got go get check on something upstairs" sonic said to Amy

"Ok" she replied "just don't run off now, sonic"

Sonic rolled his eyes and headed up stairs and opened the door to where he had laid the Pegasus

But she was not there

"What the-"sonic started to look around" Hello? You around here?"There was no window so she didn't run off" sonic thought"or fly off"

He went into tails' room but he was not there either

"Tails too?" Sonic began to get frustrated

"HEY TAILS YOU HERE" sonic yelled throughout the house

Amy and cream start to wonder what was going on

"DOWN HERE SONIC" Tails replied to his wounding friend

He ran downstairs to tails workshop where has was examining the Pegasus

"*whistle* dang tails you need to get out more" sonic teased his friend

"Oh…well I can if you want I mostly do my pro-"tails said as he stared at the ground

"It's a joke tails. Hey have you seen that Pegasus anywhere "

"Oh yea I wanted to talk to you about it"

"Her" sonic corrected

"Her?" tails replied raising an eyebrow

"I don't know much about her but I heard her speak a little and it didn't sound like a dude"

"Ok then…come here I want to show you something"

Tails and sonic walked over to an examination table where the Pegasus was laying

"Dang buddy…what you do? give her a dental checkup" sonic said with a chuckle

"No, I've been running some test on her" tails said as he sat down on his computer "there is something amazing about her that I think you should hear"

Sonic leaned against the wall with his arms-crossed

Tails began "I did a physical overview on her and I noticed something, her wings, look here"

Tails stood up walked over the Pegasus and held up a wing and started talking again

"Her wings have incredible strength in them…the bones replicate a strong force that, when in motion, gives off an enormous push giving her great great flying capabilities"

He laid the wing down

"So basically what you're saying is, she is a great flyer" sonic said trying to dumb it down

"More than that, come here" tails said

Tails sat at his computer with sonic leaning over him

He pulled up two charts giving readings that sonic didn't know anything about. That two reading almost looked identical

"ummm what am I looking at" sonic said staring at tails

"Well…" tails began

"BREAKFEST IS READY" Amy screamed downstairs

"What's Amy doing here?" tails asked

"She and cream were wounding if you could fix creams' toy"

"Oh well… what is she doing making breakfast…with my food?"

"Tails…you know the government pays for all our stuff, so why are you complaining"

"…touché" tails replied

They both stood up and headed up stairs

"We'll talk more after we eat "sonic said

"Ok good, I'm starving "tails replied "I hope it's good'

"Well if I know Amy she's got one heck of a meal waiting for us"

"Yep, Amy's' a really good cook"

When they got to the top they didn't see breakfast…they saw brunch. The kitchen table was loading with delouses food. There were eggs leaking with juice with the yoke in the center giving off smell making sonic and tails mouth water. The toast was a nice shade of brown with grape jelly beside it, and the biscuits were on a platter letting off steam that could make a man float in the air.

"This…is…" tails started" BEAUTYFULL"

"Dang Amy…I'm speechless" sonic said with a smile on his face

"You like it?…well lets dig in" Amy stated

"No problem" sonic replied

They all sat down and started enjoying Amys' cooking when they notice something

"Hey cream" sonic said with egg in his mouth "where's cheese at?"

"Mommy needed help with something and she ask if cheese could stay behind while I'm here" cream said after swallowing

"Oh" sonic said filling his mouth up with another egg


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"FLUTTERSHY GET OUT OF THERE" screamed the blue creature

She was finally up. She was breathing heavy after she shouted it. She looked like she had a nightmare.

"What? Where am I" said the Pegasus

She picked herself up and started to look around. She saw machines and computers. "oh man I got to get out of here"

"What was that?" Amy said  

"What was what?" sonic replied

"I thought I heard something scream from downstairs"

Sonic and tails looked at each other

"Stay here" sonic told them

"Why? What's going on" Amy said with a nervous look on her face

They all stood up and got back .cream was hiding behind Amy. Amy drew her hammer ready for whatever was in the basement

Tails grabbed his homemade laser pistol, he made from experimenting with eggmans' tech.

"I'm going down there" said sonic with a heroic voice

"Be careful" Amy worried

Sonic opened the door and started walking downstairs

"Oh crap" thought the blue Pegasus "got to hide, got to hide, who knows what these creeps are"</i.>

As she tried to take cover she hit a few things and knocked over some projects tails had hanging up or lying down on a table, causing a mess, she also hit the lights knocking out the lights leaving the entire basement, but one part, in darkness "ow" the Pegasus said in pain

Cream grabbed on to Amy "I'm scared" she said

"It'll be ok, sonic will handle this" she reassured the frighten rabbit

Sonic was almost at the bottom

"HEY TAILS THROW ME A LIGHT" sonic yelled up stairs

"I CAN'T, ALL MY TOOLS ARE DOWN THERE" tails said

"Well…crap" sonic said to himself

As he reached to bottom he started to look around, but then he ran upstairs shutting the door

"SONIC?! What are you-"tails said sweating a little

"It's ok" sonic said "I know what im doing don't worry about it? "Tails readied himself

"ok…"  tails said with a little doubt

"Alright then" sonic headed back down the basement

As he walked down to the basement again, he looked over to where the Pegasus was laying down but she was not there. He knew this cause there was a little light still on top of the table

"Hello?" sonic called out

"Hey I'm not going to hurt you. Come on out" sonic said as he looked for a light

There was no answer

"Ok then…" sonic said as he found tails' flashlight

"I guess we're playing hide-and-seek" sonic said looking around in the dark

Sonic kept searching, walking over the falling objects which the Pegasus knocked down

"I'm going to find you…and if you're going to run… or fly… or whatever you do I just thought you should know…"  sonic said as he looked up" I'm the fastest thing in the world"

As soon as he saw her she bolted at sonic bucking him in the stomach then dashed up stairs. She used her wings to fly straight through tails and Amy so fast that the only thing they saw was the door busting open

"uh oh…I was afraid of this" tails said going out side

The pegasus knock down the front door as well and was already in the air flying to Time Square

"Where the hay am I?!" she said

She was shocked on how the city looked. It was a whole new world for her the skyscrapers and the planes flying around. She was just flying in place looking at everything in awe

Amy rushed down to sonic who was holding his stomach in pain

"Oh she is going to pay for that" sonic thought

"SONIC?!" said yelled for the person she loved "are you hurt? ,what was that thing?"

Before Sonic could answer her question he ran out the door and tried to catch up with the creature

"SONIC WAIT" Tails yelled "dangit sonic why are you so suborned" tails thought

Sonic raced towards the city until he spotted the creature hovering over the park

He yelled to the pegasus  "HEY WHAT THE HECK IS YOUR PROPLEM"

"ME? YOU'RE THE ONE WHO HAD ME LOCKED UP IN A LAB" the pegusas replied

"WE WASN'T RUNNING ANY EXPERIMENTS ON YOU"

"YEAH RIGHT, WHY ELES WOULD I BE IN A LAB ON AN "EXPERAMENT" TABLE"

She had him there; he would think the same thing

"LOOK IM SORRY WE HAD YOU IN THERE IF YOU COME BACK WE CAN EXPLAIN EVERYTHING TO YOU" sonic said desperate to earn her trust

"YEAH, NOT GONNA HAPPEN" she replied as she sped off toward the center of the city

"Dang …she's' fast" sonic thought as he readied himself "but I'm faster"

And the chase is on

Mean while back at tails' house

"This is bad…really bad" tails said with a nervous sound

"What do you mean? Sonic will catch up to that…thing no problem" Amy reassured her twinned tailed friend

"No, it is a problem …follow me"

The three of them headed down the basement

"Oh look at this mess, it's going to take me forever to clean this up" tails pouted

"Quit worrying about you house and tell me what that thing was." Amy demanded

"Well all we know that it's a pegasis of some kind." Tails started "sonic rescued it when it came through some kind of portal, and he brought it back here for me to look at it and I ran some test on it and well… you'll need to see it to believe it"

Tails walked over to his computer and sat down while tails and Amy looked over his shoulder. A screen that tails show sonic earlier came up

"Look here" tails pointed at the screen "look at the data I received when I tested her wings"

"HER?!" Amy thought "ohhhhhh she is going to pay for hurting my sonic"

"Ok…so I'm guessing she can fly well?" Amy noticed

"Yes well there's more. Here is the data I have on Sonics' legs" tail said as he brought up another screen

"Look here" tails pointed at to data screen

"Tails…what does this mean" cream said

"It means that this pegasus can fly as fast as sonic can run"

A horrifying look took over Amys and Creams' face
ok part 3

oh in case your wounding these takes place in the sonic x universe

and i got to say i write alot but this is by far the longest thing I've written and its going to get longer oh boy :icontiredplz:

well i'm tired now this took me all day to make...i need to get a life lol

if you have idea on how this can be better or have suggestions feel free to speak your peace

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Shadowsmyhottie Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
This is great so far!=D You got me to finally start watching My Little Pony, which I never thought I'd like. The only thing I'd suggest is to work on your spelling and punctuation. It looks as if you rushed through this and posted it without looking it over first.
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xgamerx01 Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've looked over this many times but as you can see above i have someone revising it ^^;

i just haven't had the time recently
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Shadowsmyhottie Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh okay. Sorry to bother you.^^; n I see.
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So now for this chapter

The next day

Tails, Sonic and the Pegasus creature were still asleep.

It was 10:00am and everyone was still asleep
I would recommend turning it into something like this: The next day came swiftly, almost as swift as Sonic’s speed. Yet because of yesterday’s late night, Sonic and Tails were still asleep at 10:00am. The Pegasus upstairs was also still passed out.

Someone was bagging on tails' door They banged so hard that Tails name was not capitalized

"uhhh…what?' sonic said rubbing his eyes I’ll tell you what Sonic, your name needs to be capitalized. And after what you need a quotation mark, not a apostrophe.

"Hold on" sonic replied to the people outside the door “I just need to capitalize my name first”

"dangit tails…you need a better couch" he thought rubbing his back Tails also needs his name capitalized

"Yes?" sonic said with his eyes barley opened and his name not capitalized

It was Amy and Cream who arrived at tails' house Tails’ House needs capitalization.

She was always interested in sonic after he saved her from metal sonic years ago and she is always saying that she will be Sonics' girlfriend one day. Obviously not interested enough to have his name capitalized. And the second time you use his name you need Sonic’s not Sonics'

She is often accompanied by her chao , cheese, but he was not with her this time. I’m not sure whether Chao needs to be capitalized, but I would suggest doing so just in case. Also close in the comma after Chao and capitalize Cheese.

"Ah crap" sonic thought

"oof…hey..Amy" sonic struggled as Amy's' hug was suffocating him
Sonic needs to be capitalized both times, you need one more period after hey, and delete the apostrophe after the S on Amy’s

"Uhh..Amy I think your crushing him" said cream in a shy voice Put another period after Uhh and capitalize Cream</b>

"Its ok" replied sonic catching his breath "what are you two doing here?"

"My favorite toy broke and I was hoping tails could fix it" cream said presenting her broken toy

"Oh well tails is asleep right now, me and him have been up late discussing something" sonic said to cream

"Oh well I guess we ca-"cream replied before being interrupted by Amy
You missed capitalizing every name here except for Amy’s in the last sentence. Here’s a count for you: 2 for Sonic, 3 for Cream, and 1 for Tails

"Well we can stay until he wakes up "Amy said "I don't mind being here. Especially if you're here sonic " At the second quotation mark at the end of each statement Amy made you need to space it over one. And then Capitalize Sonic.

This gave sonic a nervous feeling "well I would love to stay but I got to run "said said as he was rushing to the door but Amy blocked his path Close off the second quotation mark after run, capitalize Sonic, and then put down said Sonic instead of said said. Oh, and make sure that Sonic is capitalized.

"Now hold up sonic, you're going to rush out but I don't think you've eaten breakfast yet? Have you?" Amy stated trying to come up with an accuse to make sonic stay Sonic needs to be capitalized twice here, and Amy wants an excuse, not an accuse.

Sonic stomach started to rumble "crap…"sonic said holding his stomach Space the quotation mark before the second Sonic, then Capitalize the second Sonic

"Really Amy …oh well no use of arguing"thought sonic Put a space between the quotation mark and thought, and then Capitalize Sonic

Throughout the past sonic could never get past Amy whenever she set her mind to something, so he grabbed a seat Throughout the past you could never remember to capitalize Sonic. Aw well, at least you started doing that later so I’ll have less work soon.

"Wonder how that horse is holding up questioned sonic still not getting used to the term pegasus You need a quotation mark after questioned, to capitalize Sonic, then to Capitalize Pegasus.

"I've got go get check on something upstairs" sonic said to Amy

"Ok" she replied "just don't run off now, sonic"
Both Sonics need to be capitalize.

"What the-"sonic started to look around" Hello? You around here?"There was no window so she didn't run off" sonic thought"or fly off" Capitalize Sonic, put a space between the quotation mark and there, Capitalize the second Sonic, and put a space between the quotation mark after thought and or.

He went into tails' room but he was not there either Nether was your capitalization on Tails found.

He ran downstairs to tails workshop where has was examining the Pegasus

"*whistle* dang tails you need to get out more" sonic teased his friend

"Oh…well I can if you want I mostly do my pro-"tails said as he stared at the ground

"It's a joke tails. Hey have you seen that Pegasus anywhere "
Tails needs to be capitalized four times here and Sonic once. Also, you need to do this: "Oh…well I can if you want. I mostly do my pro-" Tails said as he stared at the ground

"Her" sonic corrected

"Her?" tails replied raising an eyebrow
Tails and Sonic both need to be capitalized

Tails and sonic walked over to an examination table where the Pegasus was laying

"Dang buddy…what you do? give her a dental checkup" sonic said with a chuckle
Sonic needs capitalization twice and Give needs to be capitalized.

"No, I've been running some test on her" tails said as he sat down on his computer "there is something amazing about her that I think you should hear" Tails found the computer room. Now if only he could find his name Capitalized

"Her wings have incredible strength in them…the bones replicate a strong force that, when in motion, gives off an enormous push giving her great great flying capabilities" Her flying capabilities are so great that it needed to be repeated twice. On second thought, delete the second great.

"So basically what you're saying is, she is a great flyer" sonic said trying to dumb it down

"More than that, come here" tails said

Tails sat at his computer with sonic leaning over him
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice, Tails once.

He pulled up two charts giving readings that sonic didn't know anything about. That two reading almost looked identical Sonic needs to be capitalized and That two readings needs to be The two readings.

"ummm what am I looking at" sonic said staring at tails

"Well…" tails began
Tails needs to be capitalized twice and Sonic once.

"What's Amy doing here?" tails asked

"She and cream were wounding if you could fix creams' toy"
Tails and Cream both need to be capitalized and creams’ needs to become Cream’s.

"…touché" tails replied I’m sure you can guess what I’m going to say but just in case, Capitalize Tails

"We'll talk more after we eat "sonic said

"Ok good, I'm starving "tails replied "I hope it's good'
You made the same mistake here twice. Instead of what’s above you need this: "We'll talk more after we eat” Sonic said

"Ok good, I'm starving" Tails replied "I hope it's good”

"Yep, Amy's' a really good cook" Delete the second apostrophe on Amy’s

There were eggs leaking with juice with the yoke in the center giving off smell making sonic and tails mouth water. Warning, egg smell may cause loss of capitalization on both Sonic and Tails name. Fixing that would be the recommended cure.

"This…is…" tails started" BEAUTYFULL" Be careful when all capsing something. Spell check will not detect it. So you need to Capitalize Tails, fix the third quotation mark, and the spell BEAUTIFUL.

"Dang Amy…I'm speechless" sonic said with a smile on his face So speechless that he couldn’t even capitalize his own name. So do it for him

They all sat down and started enjoying Amys' cooking when they notice something move the apostrophe to Amy’s.

"Hey cream" sonic said with egg in his mouth "where's cheese at?"

"Mommy needed help with something and she ask if cheese could stay behind while I'm here" cream said after swallowing

"Oh" sonic said filling his mouth up with another egg
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice, Cream needs to be capitalized twice, and Cheese needs to be capitalized twice.

"What was what?" sonic replied Do I even need to say it. Capitalize!

Sonic and tails looked at each other

"Stay here" sonic told them
Tails and Sonic both need to be capitalized once.

Tails grabbed his homemade laser pistol, he made from experimenting with eggmans' tech. Eggman’s tech.

"I'm going down there" said sonic with a heroic voice Obvious next statement is obvious. Capitalize

"Oh crap" thought the blue Pegasus "got to hide, got to hide, who knows what these creeps are"</i.></i> From here on out you accidently Italicized everything because you accidently put a period between the I and the >. I would suggest fixing that.

As she tried to take cover she hit a few things and knocked over some projects tails had hanging up or lying down on a table, causing a mess, she also hit the lights knocking out the lights leaving the entire basement, but one part, in darkness "ow" the Pegasus said in pain Ok, this’ll take to long to explain so:
As she tried to take cover she hit a few things and knocked over some projects Tails had hanging up or lying down on a table, causing a mess, she also hit the lights knocking out the lights leaving the entire basement, but one part, in darkness. "Ow" the Pegasus said in pain.

"It'll be ok, sonic will handle this" she reassured the frighten rabbit Capitalize Sonic.

"HEY TAILS THROW ME A LIGHT" sonic yelled up stairs

"I CAN'T, ALL MY TOOLS ARE DOWN THERE" tails said

"Well…crap" sonic said to himself
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice, Tails once.

"SONIC?! What are you-"tails said sweating a little Space between quotation mark and Tails, and then capitalize Tails.

"It's ok" sonic said "I know what im doing don't worry about it? "Tails readied himself Again: "It's ok" Sonic said "I know what I’m doing, so don't worry about it." Tails readied himself

"ok…" tails said with a little doubt

"Alright then" sonic headed back down the basement
Tails and Sonic both need to be capitalized.

"Hello?" sonic called out

"Hey I'm not going to hurt you. Come on out" sonic said as he looked for a light
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice.

"Ok then…" sonic said as he found tails' flashlight

"I guess we're playing hide-and-seek" sonic said looking around in the dark
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice and Tails once.

"I'm going to find you…and if you're going to run… or fly… or whatever you do I just thought you should know…" sonic said as he looked up" I'm the fastest thing in the world"

As soon as he saw her she bolted at sonic bucking him in the stomach then dashed up stairs. She used her wings to fly straight through tails and Amy so fast that the only thing they saw was the door busting open

"uh oh…I was afraid of this" tails said going out side
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice, Tails twice, and outside needs to be combined.

Amy rushed down to sonic who was holding his stomach in pain

"Oh she is going to pay for that" sonic thought
Sonic needs to be capitalized twice and I’m starting to sound like a broken record.

"SONIC?!" said yelled for the person she loved "are you hurt? ,what was that thing?" Delete the comma and then capitalize What.

"WE WASN'T RUNNING ANY EXPERIMENTS ON YOU" We weren’t running any experiments on you, not we wasn’t.

"LOOK IM SORRY WE HAD YOU IN THERE IF YOU COME BACK WE CAN EXPLAIN EVERYTHING TO YOU" sonic said desperate to earn her trust Sonic should be more desperate to Capitalize his name.

"Dang …she's' fast" sonic thought as he readied himself "but I'm faster" Delete the second apostrophe on she’s and then Capitalize Sonic.

Mean while back at tails' house Meanwhile back at Tails’ house.

"This is bad…really bad" tails said with a nervous sound Capitalize

"No, it is a problem …follow me" delete the space between problem and the ellipsis.

"Oh look at this mess, it's going to take me forever to clean this up" tails pouted Capitalize

"Well all we know that it's a pegasis of some kind." Put a comma after well and then it’s Pegasus.

"sonic rescued it when it came through some kind of portal, Capitalize

A screen that tails show sonic earlier came up Tails and Sonic need to be capitalized.

"Look here" tails pointed at the screen "look at the data I received when I tested her wings" Capitalize Tails

"HER?!" Amy thought "ohhhhhh she is going to pay for hurting my sonic" Capitalize Sonic and then make this a future plot point.

"Yes well there's more. Here is the data I have on Sonics' legs" tail said as he brought up another screen

"Look here" tails pointed at to data screen
Sonic’s legs, Tails said, and then capitalize Tails one last time.

"Tails…what does this mean" cream said

"It means that this pegasus can fly as fast as sonic can run"
Capitalize Cream and Sonic.

A horrifying look took over Amys and Creams' face Amy’s and Cream’s face.
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I luff it! Please update soon!
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xgamerx01 Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow thanks for the feedback
i'm working on part 4 it will be up either late at night (its 11:00 over here) or tomorrow

mind giving some tips on why you love it? it could help

damnit i'm such a noob :ashamed:
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Just From what I know your story is really accurate. One thIng that I like is how you made the charators's personallity. I also like hoe how you made sonic and rainbow about equal speed. Because the way I see it in my mind is they are practically the same person only different. But many people make sonic faster than dashie. I also like how its dashie in sonic's world, not the other way around. I basically like your story because of it's originality. That shows creativity.
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xgamerx01 Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you that means alot

i need to slow down writing though i have made alot of careless mistakes
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I understand having some mistakes, because I know spelling me= really bad mistakes
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xgamerx01 Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
part 4 is almost done
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